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[Jetpack Man Demo 1.0.0.1]

Not bad, but needs some polish

Title. That, and the fact that pressing up doesn't really make me go up (Have to press UP+L/R) is really annoying.

Gimmick responds:

If i do that fix, there will be only one frame when he is flying: He will go left and up and he will face right. That's a glitch even i can't solve. And i can't discuss it with any other person on the bbs, 'cos i'm banned. God only knows why i'm banned.

[Otus the Bee!]

Several suggestions:

1. Add sounds effects for the various actions (getting pollen, getting pesticide, and going off screen)
2. Rather than letting score go negative, add a game over screen.
3. The bee seems to rotate a bit freely, it'd probably be better if it stayed mostly horizontal and tipped a bit during acceleration in different directions.

Johny2K8 responds:

Cheers for the advice i'll consider what you suggested if i come back to this game.