The parts are individually good; what ruins the composition is the transitions. With the second of silence between the three distinct themes, you might as well have split it up into three songs.
i c wat u did ther.
I heard the first 5 seconds and was like "I RECOGNIZE THAT MELODY" and then it took me another 3 minutes before I actually looked at the title of this song.
Didn't like the intro
Didn't like the intro, but after 0:56 it was pretty good.
Fuck you, that intro was perfect.
I'm not a particularly big fan of classical parts in the middle of music, but in this song, I have to say it fits perfectly. My only complaint about it is that the classical part seems to come too early in the song.
It was the story how it was told when the writter picked up his digital pen and started writting...sometimes I am not in total control, this may sound weird but I have really tried to make a *normal* intro with a melody and stuff but it just... didnt..do...the job...as I had in mind...so it was a creative desicion to do it like this.
Thanks for the rev!
This is a great song and you've got a lot of potential. The one thing that kind of bothered me, though, is the beginning. The first 40 seconds sounded repetitive and could use a bit more variation or something. After that, though, it's very very good.
As I said before, the Intro could be a nice mix in or something :P
Where's the Doom?
When I clicked on this, I had expectations. They were not fulfilled. There is no doom to this. This is happy. I did not come here to hear happy. I came here to hear doom. I want my money back! (owait.)
On a more serious and less spontaneous note, there's honestly not much to judge. It's only 12 seconds, but if it were more developed, it could probably be a good song. The random backgrounds sounds are a bit odd, too.
You have a thing for food...
And one for nice, short, catchy loops.
Overall sounds pretty good, but I think the percussion overpowers the melody for most of the song (except for the parts where it's not there, obviously)
By thy way, good looping. I was typing this review during the last few seconds of the song, and didn't realize it had looped until 30 seconds in again.
lol thx. I guess the perc. is powering the song, but i detuned it so it wouldnt be so obnoxious.
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